Thursday, April 03, 2008

Not quite right

I've been working on this invitation for the ear doctor's cinco de mayo/graduation party and something about it just isn't quite right. I don't know if it's the font, spacing or colors.



Any thoughts?

6 comments:

Heather said...

Ear Doctor
& Mexico's

FREEDOM!

Might be better than that random 'for' sticking out there.

Love the colors and design otherwise! Great job!

Heather said...

Sorry double comments....

Or maybe...

Celebrate Freedom!

Ear Doctor & Mexico



You could probably put a few aye aye aye!'s in there too.

TRS said...

very cute. You are more creative than I... so I can't really add.

Ya wanna help me design an invitation for my dad's 75th Birthday Party? It's a surprise.

Anth said...

I agree with Heather. The "for" looks a bit off.

Miss Hass said...

Yeah, me too.

Can the ampersand be a bit heavier?

Also, the picky, picky Spanish teacher in me says, "Put a tilde on piñata and niños" even though you TECHNICALLY don't need them on capital letters...

But really, katie, it's soooo much better than anything I could design.

Also, LOVE the lace flags.

Courtney said...

SO CUTE!!!

Really I think it's darling just the way it is (p.s. do you want to design my wedding invites!??) But if you are really looking to change it a bit, is there anyway to move the bottom row of flags up a smidge so all the wording can be a bit higher? Not sure it'll be a *good* change, but it might be worth a shot.