Any thoughts?
Thursday, April 03, 2008
Not quite right
I've been working on this invitation for the ear doctor's cinco de mayo/graduation party and something about it just isn't quite right. I don't know if it's the font, spacing or colors.
Any thoughts?
Any thoughts?
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Ear Doctor
& Mexico's
FREEDOM!
Might be better than that random 'for' sticking out there.
Love the colors and design otherwise! Great job!
Sorry double comments....
Or maybe...
Celebrate Freedom!
Ear Doctor & Mexico
You could probably put a few aye aye aye!'s in there too.
very cute. You are more creative than I... so I can't really add.
Ya wanna help me design an invitation for my dad's 75th Birthday Party? It's a surprise.
I agree with Heather. The "for" looks a bit off.
Yeah, me too.
Can the ampersand be a bit heavier?
Also, the picky, picky Spanish teacher in me says, "Put a tilde on piñata and niños" even though you TECHNICALLY don't need them on capital letters...
But really, katie, it's soooo much better than anything I could design.
Also, LOVE the lace flags.
SO CUTE!!!
Really I think it's darling just the way it is (p.s. do you want to design my wedding invites!??) But if you are really looking to change it a bit, is there anyway to move the bottom row of flags up a smidge so all the wording can be a bit higher? Not sure it'll be a *good* change, but it might be worth a shot.
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